Read my script services

For the last six years, I've been proofreading, critiquing, editing, and ghostwriting content for aspiring local filmmakers.  Through Fiverr, I want to expand my reaches and make my services available, for the first time, to the general public.  By choosing this gig, you get a native English speaker with a passion for cinema and a blazing fast turnaround for such quality of work.  I choose the word relentlessly because I won't beat around the bush. This gig covers grammar, structure, flow, and crucially, a full editorial critique of the STORY.  If that sounds good to you, let's get cracking!

For $10, I will write a 30-second (75-word) script for your video. For longer scripts and additional services, please use the appropriate extras! What do you need to do?Send me as much information as possible. It is essential that I know everything that's important about your business, product or anything else you need me to write about in order to create a great script! Please clearly state your requirements. Supplying additional information or changing requirements after delivery may lead to additional charges. How to estimate how many words you need?For 30 seconds, you need about 75 words, for 1 minute about 150 words, and so on. The rule of thumb is that you need 2-3 words per second. So when can you get your script?It usually takes me between 2 and 3 days to deliver a script, depending on the number of orders. If you need to get it faster, check out my extras!For 12-hour delivery, please contact me first. Need a written concept for the storyboard?I will create visual description for your video for $10/30 seconds. Please read the FAQ for more information. What's next?Order or contact me, send the information, and your work is done and mine begins. Thank you!

Hey there!  So you have a script and you are not sure how awesome it is? I am here for you. I will read your script and review it in details so that you know what someone totally random thinks about your work and what kinds of questions arise while reading your script. You can make necessary changes according to my review if I find loopholes/flaws in the storytelling.  I have done this before for a number of friends. I, along with my friend, also happen to run a movie blog called Leaky Loonage. So yeah...I am a movie buff who has watched lots of movies and read a number of movie scripts. Try me! You won't be disappointed.

Greetings, screenwriters. Frustrated? Stuck? Lost? Getting conflicting feedback from friends and family? Is my script any good...?  We've all been there. Including myself. Me? I'm a TV writer and screenwriter, as well as a former development executive and script consultant.  I've read a lot of scripts. A lot of them. And it's been a twenty year journey in the business to understand what makes a script good. As I like to say, anyone can tell you what's wrong with your script, it takes a real artist to tell you what's right with it. And that's what I offer. I will read your screenplay and create story and character notes, highlighting problems and areas of concern, but will also focus on what's working and how to build on that.  Also, as I work in the industry, I'll offer marketing thoughts, as to how best get your script into the right hands or a best path to a sale. After all, we aren't just storytellers; we're trying to make a sale.  I will help guide your script to the next level.

The reviews say it all, I'm the most qualified script writer/evaluator on Fiverr. Plus, my notes actually help IMPROVE YOUR SCRIPT! In addition to my personal screenwriting success (I've sold two feature films) I have over 10yrs experience in script writing & evaluation. I'm also a working producer (look me up on IMDb) so getting your work in front of me is a bonus. My notes are the most comprehensive and valuable out there. I not only break down the quality of writing and effectiveness of the story, but I help writers build on the emotional foundation and characters in a way that takes a script to the next level. My notes have helped clients go on to win major festivals/competitions, including the PAGE Awards, Scriptapalooza and The Beverly Hills Film Festival. ALL PACKAGES INCLUDE FORMATTING CORRECTIONS TO GET YOUR SCRIPT INTO INDUSTRY STANDARD FORMAT! Here's the rundown:$40 read and offer notes on a short script up to 35 pgs$70 read and offer notes on a script or pilot up to 70 pgs $90 read and offer notes on a full-length script or pilot up to 120 pgs For scripts shorter than 35 pgs or longer than 120 pgs reach out for a custom offer. I hope to read your work!

I will read a voice over script you provide in a child or preteen voice!

ENGLISH VO ONLY. The time required to learn pronunciation of non-english words creates for a job that takes more time than is practical for a $5 gig. If you require non-english quick phrases or names, we can negotiate price!

SCRIPT MUST BE PROOFREAD & EDITED BEFORE SENDING. I WILL READ EXACTLY WHAT IS SENT TO ME.

I DO NOT EDIT IF YOU DO NOT PAY FOR IT. I can separate files for you at an additional charge.

Spell out ALL abbreviations as you want them read.

Send your script PDF, TXT, or DOC(x) files

Re-records due to an error in the script itself will require the purchase of another gig. Please be sure what you have in your script is EXACTLY what you want read, word for word!

Add any specific instructions or a link to an example what you have in mind.

I do not do extreme sexual content or derogatory content, please respect that. 

*** PLEASE BE AWARE THAT MY NATURAL VOICE IS VERY YOUTHFUL SO ANY VOICE OVER SOUNDING OLDER THAN A PRETEEN CANNOT BE DELIVERED. IF YOU ARE SEEKING AN OLDER TEEN OR ADULT VOICE, THIS IS NOT THE GIG FOR YOU.*** 

Will provide in high-quality MP3 format. 

Take that next step and have your script critically assessed. Whether you're looking to pitch to companies or enter your pilot script into competitions, I will read your work and give you objective feedback that is more than the 'wow this is great' you always get from friends and family! I have experience on both sides; writing coverages for UK production companies and writers I am connected with, as well as being writer myself.

I'll read your script! I'll tell you how you're doing with it and how I think you could do better. The packages only differ in regards to how long your script is.The basics of each edit will include a basic grammar check and general notes on story structure and narrative craft. I've included 2 revisions so we have a chance to go back and forth a little in order to better help your script or in case I've gravely mistaken some aspects of your script.For extra, I'll help "tighten it up" and give you my recommendations for punching up your action and dialogue as well give more detailed and specific notes on your craft.

As a film programmer, film student, and ex-theater director, I've read a LOT of bad scripts, let me make sure yours isn't one of them! I will read your script and note any grammar/formatting issues as well as give you an honest opinion of your script. I love stories, not tearing people apart. It is hard sharing your work with others, so I want to reassure you that any and all notes made are only done so in the interest of making your story the best it can be.

If you feel like your script (or anything with a story) needs some help, or you just want another POV, I can help it hit all the beats a script needs in order to be the next blockbuster film! I base my pricing off of the number of words and what particular services you request. I can't wait to read what you have!

I will make an audio recording of the script you have provided for me. Please note the following:

*It is $5 per 100 words. If you have a significantly longer script (For example, I recently did a 30 page script on fraud and business) then message me and we can work out a price

*If you wish to hear a sample of my voice, send me your script and I will select part of it to read as a demo

*Don't have a script but have a general idea? Send me some key points and I'll write up a blurb for you!

Message me with any questions. I look forward to working with you!

I am here to provide you with the BEST SCRIPT BREAKDOWN on Fiverr!I don't only "read" your script. I also analyse it and make sure to provide the best service. (Hence the higher pricing) I will provide a full Color Coded Breakdown of your Script. The Breakdown is based on the different elements of the script such as:CharactersPropsLocationStuntsSoundsand many more. Included in the gig you will also receive a Script Report The Script Report includes a Scene by Scene Breakdown of all the elements present in the script. Script breakdowns are essential to have when it comes to looking at the full scope of your upcoming film. I also created Extras for all who want to get the most out of your Script.  Extras: Create a Logline and Synopsis for your film -> $20 Format your Script to the Film Industry Standard -> $20Provide you with a full Shooting Schedule for your film -> $30Create a Treatment for your film -> $30 Notes tailored to your script to challenge your vision and delivery of the film -> $30 Please make sure your script is formatted the right way or I will have to deny your request. Please message me before placing an order