Script feedback services

Welcome to Cut to: Coverage!  Each package includes a logline, synopsis, scoresheet, and feedback. The scoresheet will comprise of a grade ranging from poor to excellent and it will focus on the five principal elements of storytelling: plot, structure, dialogue, character, and format.  The feedback will also address these topics; however, it will be much more detailed. Any issue your screenplay may be struggling with will be tackled in the notes. These concerns will cover a range of topics such as premise, theme, symbolism, pacing, clarity, setting, stakes, descriptions, originality, and any other element that may warrant attention.   As to the packages, below is a list of the services I’m currently offering:   Shorts (up to 30 pages): $15 USDLoglineSynopsisScoresheetNotes: 500-750 wordsPilots (up to 70 pages): $30 USDLoglineSynopsisScoresheetNotes: 750-1,000 wordsFeatures (up to 120 pages): $40 USDLoglineSynopsisScoresheetNotes: 1,000-1,250 words If you have any addition questions or requests, please feel free to ask. I look forward to reading your screenplay!

What should I do?I can offer the ways grammar is used in every text for you giving the best words to your post or just correct a work for you

I am an experienced freelancer handling an array of topics in writing. My aim is to oversea that I deliver the best writing in the best grammar free of any spelling and punctuation mistakes. I am reliable and reachable and I strive to deliver results in time.

Is this dialogue clunky? Is my high-concept script consistently stylized? Is staging this even feasible? These questions, along with countless others, can be a major obstacle for developing a script. Despite your level of experience, there comes a point where you are no longer able to view your text objectively. Though sending your script out for feedback can be tough, or even terrifying, it’s a necessary step for the development of your piece. So let me take your script to a small Viennese café for a few hours and go through it thoroughly. From broad conceptual questions to the minutiae of dialogue and stage directions, you can expect thorough, honest, and helpful feedback (available in list or video form!)Please note: This is primarily a content critique service, not an editing or proofreading service. Most of your payment will actually go towards covering my coffee tab during the reading. Why? Because I’m genuinely excited to help you tell your story! Feel free to include and ask about any specific concerns you’d like me to address. I look forward to working with you!

I offer from 2 - 4 pages of detailed feedback on a feature length screenplay of up to 125 pages. The notes will include analytical, constructive, realistic and supportive feedback on your script in a report that will cover all elements of the script including presentation, story, structure, dialogue, characterisation, tone and genre. Where possible I will offer possible solutions and next steps. This service is also available for TV pilots of up to 65 pages.

Need a fresh pair of eyes on your latest story? Nervous to show anyone a final draft because you're sick and tired of lazy or half-hearted coverage? Want feedback from a working professional in Development in Hollywood? I provide Professional Detailed Industry Standard Coverage on your script. My goal is to help you make your script perfect and assist you in reaching your full potential as a writer! My script coverage services will save you time and money while ensuring that you receive honest and constructive feedback! Each package includes the following: LoglineScore Sheet (characters, story structure, concept, dialogue, premise, tone, and pacing)At least 3 FULL pages of notes highlighting the script's strengths and weaknesses; along with clear and concise comments and constructive feedback. (Please note the listed number of pages of notes you receive is a minimum you will likely receive more) Please do not hesitate to contact me with any questions or concerns. My number one goal is to help YOU! Side Note: If your script is longer than 120 pages or has any other unique specifications, send me a message!  Any submitted work will remain the sole property of the writer.

***Discover how to keep audiences hooked, page by page. Score the Reader’s “Recommend” stamp of approval & earn the attention of any producer***  Ever wonder what classics like Pulp Fiction, The Social Network, Citizen Kane, Sunset Boulevard, The Godfather, all have in common? Why do we crave Breaking Bad, Stranger Things and binge Black Mirror, and Rick & Morty? If you accept my gig, I will use my years of theoretical expertise & industry practice to provide Professional Script FEEDBACK on any genre (drama, comedy, action, fantasy, etc.) for your short film, TV pilot or feature length screenplay.  >> IN THIS SCRIPT COVERAGE GIG, YOU WILL RECEIVE:Industry-Standard Analysis & Feedback Report✅ Character✅ Story & Structure✅ Dialogue✅ Genre & Theme✅ Score Sheet PACKAGE EXTRAS ADDITIONALLY INCLUDE:Treatment that Enhances Your Ideas to Max. Potential✅ Logline✅ Synopsis✅ Formatting✅ Plot Development✅ Character Breakdown I’m very easy-going and enjoy collaboration with fellow screenwriters. Feel free to message me before if you have any question or queries! I ALSO OFFER SCRIPT PRODUCTION & SCRIPT PITCH SERVICES - SEE MY OTHER GIGS!! -BE THE WRITER YOU WERE BORN TO BE-

Hello:

It's almost the New Year! Are you still working on your script? Or are you finished and need some proper feedback? Bring in the New Year with some proper script coverage!

I have years of education (MFA Film) and experience working with people who are beginners in screenwriting as well as professional filmmakers who just want detailed coverage on their script (character, dialogue, tone, etc). No matter where you are in your script, there is no script that cannot be improved with proper coverage. With my service, you will be personalized script coverage, not generic, and fitting to your specific needs.

I know you're thinking about it! Send me a message and we can discuss your script more. (No charge.)

The script doctor is in! Let me help you bring your script to life. Whether you need an extra set of eyes or a more in depth look at your script. I'm here to help you hone in on your problems and make a more readable, believable script.  I have experience with: ShortsFeaturesEpisodic Work (web series)Teleplays I will provide detailed feedback about your script that focuses on script formatting, character development, utilization of dialogue, continuity, word choice, and more.  I will deliver to you: a PDF of your script with my handwritten or typed annotations/notes, a feedback form or "score sheet" that evaluates your script, and a bullet point list (as either a word document or PDF) with more notes, thoughts, or suggestions. Please note, the listed number of pages of notes you receive is a minimum you will likely receive more.

Don't know what to focus on in your next draft? Need to know if you're getting your story across to your audience? Send your play, screenplay or script of under 60 pages my way - I'll have a read and give you notes on what is working and what could be improved in your next rework. I will provide feedback on everything from character development through to thematic consistencies, from plot structure to story pacing. If there is a specific aspect of the script you would like me to focus on, I can give you more in-depth feedback regarding that too.

**PLEASE CONTACT ME BEFORE PLACING AN ORDER.** Make your script leap off the page You have the next big hit on your hands. You can feel it. But there's something missing.  Your first 10 pages are crucial Whether you're producing the project yourself or shopping the script, let my 10+ years of experience as a screenwriter & filmmaker push your script to the next level.  I have an especially keen eye for dialogueI will pinpoint aspects of the script that won't work on screenI will pinpoint script pitfalls that will turn a producer offI will ensure a producer keeps reading past your first 10 pages I've done the struggling for you Let me turn your script from mediocre to marvelous! My notes are concise & handwritten and delivered in PDF format.  Take advantage of gig extras Script formatting: I will convert your non-formatted and/or marked up script into proper formatting. A producer will throw your script in the trash if it's not properly formatted. Feedback extra: I will provide you with 500 words of feedback.Logline: I will write an engaging logline for your script. Your script is almost there! What are you waiting for?

Greetings, screenwriters. Frustrated? Stuck? Lost? Getting conflicting feedback from friends and family? Is my script any good...?  We've all been there. Including myself. Me? I'm a TV writer and screenwriter, as well as a former development executive and script consultant.  I've read a lot of scripts. A lot of them. And it's been a twenty year journey in the business to understand what makes a script good. As I like to say, anyone can tell you what's wrong with your script, it takes a real artist to tell you what's right with it. And that's what I offer. I will read your screenplay and create story and character notes, highlighting problems and areas of concern, but will also focus on what's working and how to build on that.  Also, as I work in the industry, I'll offer marketing thoughts, as to how best get your script into the right hands or a best path to a sale. After all, we aren't just storytellers; we're trying to make a sale.  I will help guide your script to the next level.

About This GigFinally finished your script that you've been cherishing for seems like a lifetime? So what now? The best way to know if you need to do an extra rewrite before giving your creation a try in studios and producer's offices is to give it to at least two readers first. One of your readers should be as far from the filmmaking as possible to give you a representation of the average cinemagoer's reaction, but another one should be right in the center of the business to give you professional feedback and an insight into the chances of your work to see a green light and make it to the screen - I am here for you. I am a screenwriter myself and I know for sure how hard it could be to distance yourself from your story to see if you need to fix anything. Love is blind! Don't worry, I can help, but be prepared to hear harsh critique.  I have experience working on TV production and I know what producers and directors expect from the script.  I will give you detailed feedback on any kind of script at any stage in your screenwriting process. I will explain any 'FAIR' or 'N/A' marks. In the gallery, you can see a template of the document that will be delivered. + See MoreLanguageEnglishRussian

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Are you the next Phoebe Waller-Bridge? The next Tarantino, perhaps? To get your foot in the door and have your scripts read by the people who matter, you need something important - that's right, COVERAGE: actionable feedback that will drastically improve your script, giving you the best possible chance of securing the attention that your talent deserves.

I will write coverage on your script in the format and style universally used by Hollywood producers and executives.

Packages include:

• Log line
• Synopsis
• Notes on character, structure, dialogue, marketability (and more!)
• Creative solutions to problems

I am a highly experienced in writing script coverage for short films, features and television pilots, with over 5 years of working in script development in Hollywood. I will read your screenplay with the mindset of a Hollywood executive and give you feedback similar to that which you would receive when submitting to production companies. 

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